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The Red Chronicles Remade 3-3

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This here is a remake of my drawing "The Red Chronicles", but this is 1 of 3 drawing I'm posting up. The drawing is complete, Colour and all, and I love how this turned out in the end.
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Nicely done! :D

That's a hell of a lot of detail. :nod: If anything, I think you could get away with slightly less detail in the line-work, just because it tends to vanish or become hard to make out when the piece is shrunk down and put online or printed in a book (posters give you a little more room). It's obvious you've got a really good handle on proportions and foreshortening (which is difficult for a lot of people). The only thing that sticks out to me as looking like a possible mistake is that the leg on the left side vanishes behind the sword, where it looks (to me) like there ought to be a red, mechanical foot sticking out behind the blade.

p.s. If you're interested, I created a group a while ago specifically for helping me find comic-style work to critique (because I was having difficulty finding comics in the critiqueable feed). The group is here:

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